Need help with my play I'm writing for school?

It sounds nice. I like the fact that you kind of used other shows that exist only you changed the names and stuff. It's catchy. However, i feel the main thing in any play, book, movie etc is to capture all types of audiences. Since you already have comedy, add just a touch of everything else. Maybe a small side love story part, some suspense, a tad bit of action, It doesn't have to be major, just enough to spin it around a little and capture those who may like other aspects of a story. I am not up to knowledge on plays, however i have read quite a few novels. I found that award winning novels are the ones that are not limited to a set genre like just comedy, or just romance, or just mystery. Stephanie Meyer wrote the Twilight Saga and although it is mainly a love story, there are parts of comedy, mystery, suspense, romance, horror, and action. Same goes for the Mortal Instruments Series and many more that I have read. But from what I have read, it sounds interesting, and i think if you remember to put a little something in it for everyone, then it will be a success.